Wen the fox get the jinjerbred man. Jak Anderson
Do you think the Gingerbread Man should have been eaten Jak because he was not very nice to the other characters?
Yes Mrs borthwick
Wen the jinja bred man ran away from the cat. Wen the fox at the jinja bred man. Charlie p
Did you not like the cat Charlie?
I lik the catCharlie p
Wen the fox et the ging bred man.Sophie Smith.
Do you think the Gingerbread Man was tasty Sophie?
Yes I do Mis Borthwick.Sophie.
wen the jingerbred man hoped on to his bak.Ryan
Is that because the fox was tricking him Ryan?
yes it wosryan
Mi faivit bit was the ould laidee wen she baics the jinjibred man.Tayla Lagerway
I licd wen the fox ate the jinjurbred man up. Harry Pallett
Wen the gingo bred man ges iten bi the fos.olly
Wen the jinjerbred Man cheerd the owd laidy cudnt cach him.Lily Betty Moore
Mi fairt part is wen the jinja bred man gets ieetun.Eva Lee
great sentences reception .I like the bit where the gingerbread man gets eaten.Tilly .f
My faforat part is wen he ran away. Aaliyah.
Well done Kandinksy, some of us remember how hard it was when we begun to write! Wait till you have to write using semi-colons! Chagall
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